Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. has this change improved the way people live? give specific reasons and examples.
Food is the most essential part of human life and preparing food was one of the toughest job, but as days passed on improbement in the methods are made. In my opinion, people way of living has been changed as the food has become easier to prepare.It is because of the 2 reasons which I will discuss in the following passage.
First of all, nowadays people are busy with their fast-paced life and as methods of preparing food have become easier, it will definitely affect their life in a good way. Since food has become easier to prepare the time which it takes also reduced, so it is very useful to the people who live in big cities. This can explain with following the compelling example.A few years ago, my brother lived in India, he had asked to attend the project launched in another country, USA, and has to do some last-minute changes by his boss. So he went there had lot of work to do before the product launch. He was so busy with work and he was aked by his colleague whether he can order food for him,however, he Doesn't like the restaurant's food, so he prepares his food in few minutes thanks to modern techniques.In this way modern and easier methods to prepare food can improve the way people live.
Secondly, many young people are more attracted to fast food and junk food but it can be controlled if they have the idea that preparing food at home is not a big deal and it can also be prepared instantly. For instance, there was my friend's little sister, she loved fast food such as a McDonald's burger, KFC chicken buckets, etc. In addition to that she was very intransigent, wanted fast food every day. Later on, when she comes to known about the home made "upma" and "poha",
she firstly tried to prepare it and liked very much, from then ate healthy food most of the time and slowly she reduces the frequency of eating junk food and started enjoying preparing as well as eating healthy food.
In conclusion, I strongly belive that these changes in food prepration has ameliorated the way people live such as people in fast paced life can save time
and making young people attaractec towards healthy food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61558441558 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49839347943 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.6857773036 48.9658058833 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.083333333 100.406767564 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0833333333 20.6045352989 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.25 5.45110844103 261% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308277353633 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124291891512 0.076458572812 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100784282502 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167770628235 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884610979946 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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