More and more people are buying ready to eat foods instead of cooking themselves. Does this development has more advantages or more disadvantages?
These days many people prefer to go for ready-made food over preparing at home. Although, it saves time in today’s busy schedule of people but increases the risk to health as pre-made food for consumption is not healthy.
One evident benefit to having food which is already made and packaged is saving the most valuable thing of today’s world is ‘Time’. Overly demanding work schedules, long traveling time to office places reduces the time and energy people finally get for themselves. So, getting ready-made food for breakfast, lunch and dinner could save them a couple of hours every day which they can spend on self well-being or with family and friends. This is a clear advantage that people feel and hence choose ready to eat food.
On the other hand, there are obvious disadvantages to having packaged foods daily. Firstly, it impacts health in the long run which people fail to realize and hence they ignore. Packaged food comes with preservatives and other chemicals that ensure the food to be in consumable condition for a longer period, but it impacts the health of the consumer. Secondly, the tradition of home cooking food which is always considered healthy as people can cook according to their health requirements would diminish and will create a society which will be prone to different health-related problems in the future.
In conclusion, having pre-cooked packaged food saves time but the consumption should be limited and only for unavoidable situations as it impacts health in the long run, it is taken frequently. Cooking at home should be done more regularly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 514, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to ready'
Suggestion: to ready
...ntage that people feel and hence choose ready to eat food. On the other hand, th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16730038023 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80479531875 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58174904943 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4763347685 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.25 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182988438707 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765728895933 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652951412501 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105933230034 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022371084543 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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