A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
education plays a very important role in shaping the future of an individual as it is the schooling which we receive helps us to identify our prominent characteristics and defines us as a specific person. Designing national curriculum can be considered as a vital task as the future of the students depends on what they learn at their school, however having same syllabus can have its advantages as well as disadvantages too.
Keeping nationwide same curriculum gives a chance for every student to receive same quality education irrespective of whether they belong from a rural background or an urban background. it also creates uniformity in the education system, however this can also lead to few challenges like hiring teachers who are more well versed and provide better quality of education, providing financial assistance to students who are from economically low backgrounds.
having same curriculum throughout the nation can also have its disadvantages too. By receiving the same syllabus students are forced to learn the subjects in which they are not interested due to which they might feel pressurised, for example a student who wants to become a musician does not require to study about other subjects like physics instead he/she should be attending music classes to strengthen their skills. also having the same curriculum doesn’t give students a chance to explore a different subjects as it might restrict them to learn only a limited amount of things.
it is better to have a nationwide same syllabus only till primary level of education in schools after which the students should be given a chance to select their subjects based on their interests, moreover extracurricular activities should also be introduced in schools which can provide students a wide range of options to learn new things and can also help them to discover their passion.
Each and every student should be given a chance to explore different fields and choose what is best for them rather than making a wrong decision which might effect their future due to their insufficient knowledge about their interests.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...from economically low backgrounds. having same curriculum throughout the nation c...
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...he/she should be attending music classes to strengthen their skills. also having ...
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...ic classes to strengthen their skills. also having the same curriculum doesn't...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 341.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21994134897 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84773534246 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507331378299 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 23.0359550562 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.7569330492 60.3974514979 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 197.777777778 118.986275619 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.8888888889 23.4991977007 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 5.21951772744 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189492974525 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906501308852 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486461198369 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112468701184 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498666835214 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 14.1392134831 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 48.8420337079 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.1743820225 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 11.8971910112 172% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 11.2143820225 150% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.7820224719 178% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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