tpo 38 Triassic mass-extinction
The material discusses the possible causes of a mass-extinction at the end of the Triassic period. While the reading looks at the topic from one perspective, the listening challenges certain points outlined in the reading passage.
Firstly, the reading details the points regarding this topic, namely sea-level change. Next, global cooling due to volcanic activity. Finally, the extinction happened because of an asteroid strike the Earth.
Conversely, the lecture challenges the points, one specific contradiction is during the Triassic period sea level went down quite gradually, so habitats adapted to it. In order to have a negative impact on the ocean populations, sea-level fluctuations should happen suddenly. In addition to that, the global cooling that happened because of the volcanic activity happened for short period, because sulfur dioxide was cleared out from the atmosphere quickly, SO2 combined with water vapor and fall as rains. Consequently, the cooling period that happened at the end of the Triassic period was not long enough to cause the mass-extinction. One final point, if there was an asteroid strike during this period, there should be a astroids' crater, however, the only crater had been found dated back to 12 million years ago, which was too long before the mass-extinction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 724, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, conversely, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, regarding, so, while, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 7.30242825607 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 22.412803532 27% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 1373.03311258 81% => OK
No of words: 204.0 270.72406181 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42156862745 5.08290768461 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87025606136 2.5805825403 111% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632352941176 0.540411800872 117% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 419.366225166 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6313909096 49.2860985944 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.6 110.228320801 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06452816374 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124209421827 0.272083759551 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588361146648 0.0996497079465 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844986555352 0.0662205650399 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932691717554 0.162205337803 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447890495458 0.0443174109184 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.3589403974 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.8541721854 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.2367328918 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.42419426049 109% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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