Which one do you prefer：
1) a company offering you a job with challenging and interesting project but less
vacation days or
2) another company offering you a job that is not so challenging and interesting but
more vacation days.
In modern society, people have much pressure on choosing their work. Some people would like to have jobs with challenging and interesting project. Others want jobs with more vacation days. In my opinion, i prefer to do jobs with challenging and interesting.
First of all, people will be more active and filled with energy when they do interesting projects. Nothing is as important as passion in a job. People would like to spend more time in the project they are interested in. Therefore, they filled with energy to take part in the project. On the contrary, if people do not like the project, they will frustrating in their work time. For example, my coworker, amy, she is doing a math project with me. Unfortunately, she is not good at math at all and she thinks the project is boring. Hence, she is not active and she can even not come up with any ideas in this project.
In addition, most of the challenging projects offer high salary for workers. Challenges means it is more difficult to accomplishment. Moreover, people need spend more time and energy on these projects. To encourage more employees to finish challenges projects, most of the companies offer higher salary for these projects. For instance, the creativity project is always the most hard part for workers. Worker need to have a wide horizon and the ability to creat new ideas. Therefore, these projects offer workers with high salary.
Admittedly, people can also do challenging and interesting things during long vacation days. Even through they do less challenging and interesting in company, but they have more days for rest. They can do challenging and interesting things during long vacation days to release their pressure. Most of these activities, such as skiing and rock climbing cannot be finished in short vacations.
In the nutshell, jobs with challenging and interesting can provide energy and high salary for people. So I prefer to a company offering me a job with challenging and interesting projects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...with more vacation days. In my opinion, i prefer to do jobs with challenging and ...
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Line 5, column 347, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'frustrate'
Suggestion: frustrate
...ople do not like the project, they will frustrating in their work time. For example, my cow...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in short, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03003003003 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74404154455 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459459459459 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.6244570391 48.9658058833 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.0 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.32 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294231275123 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103672746014 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100126384494 0.0737576698707 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20812317678 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0974911771903 0.0645574589148 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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