In some countries, there has been an increasing number of parents who educated their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Education always plays a vital role in modern society. there are an increasing number of parents preferred to educating their children at home in some nations. However, others are holding the opposite opinion. This essay will argue that why the pros of educating children at school outweigh the cons.
On the one hand, schooling will benefits children in several ways. Firstly, children will not only acquire knowledge but also spark their desires for learning after formal schooling. As the teachers are well educated and trained which they know well about how to deal with and teaching their students. Besides, it is a common phenomenon that children are more likely to study hard with teachers instead of their parents. In addition, children learn at school with their peers will advance their minds and socialisation. It is, not only the behaviours but also the psychology are influent if a child study alone at home.
On the other hand, people educating their children at home are claimed that study at home is more convenient and efficient. There are much time will be saved if people choose to learn at home. In other words, parents avoid to spend time sending their children to school, and then they would arrange the study schedules more flexible. Additional, parents would have enough patience to stimulate their children to the preference for some useful subjects which particularly fit their careers in the future.
In conclusion, although educating at home convenient both students and parents, the importance of schooling cannot be ignored. As learning at home are required a great deal of discipline which most of the students are cannot achieve. I completely agree that the benefits of study at school outweigh the drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: There
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
...s. On the one hand, schooling will benefits children in several ways. Firstly, chil...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid spending'.
Suggestion: avoid spending
... learn at home. In other words, parents avoid to spend time sending their children to school, ...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ortance of schooling cannot be ignored. As learning at home are required a great d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, well, in addition, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18596491228 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55195083465 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529824561404 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5878959257 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9411764706 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7647058824 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41176470588 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338105348007 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11848419617 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944638308188 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226301648185 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772786431225 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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