The local council has decided to build a block of flats on the park opposite the place where you are living
Write a letter to the editor of the local newspaper:
- Where did you hear this news and your opinion?
- The reason why you protest it
- Make suggestions for what people can or should do to stop the development
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Behnaz Yousefi. I live in Greet Street on 12 block located opposite of the park, next to the post office. I am writing to you regarding the horrible news which I heard from one of my neighbors, Mr. Smith, the other day. He told me all about the local council decision to construct a block of flats in the park location. I am deeply disappointed with this change in my neighborhood and hoping to alter your resolve about the plan.
The park is a place where lots of people go there to unwind, exercise, and simply have fun. In the morning, it is crowded with those who want to start their working day with a little run and fresh air. In the afternoon, the sound of children laughs can be heard from far away. Finally, in the evening, it is filled with families spending some quality time together. It is a shame to put an end to all these activities and happiness. Besides, there are enough building in this street and adding more dwellers to the population is going to take toll on the livelihood of the neighborhood.
We are responsible for preserving our environment not only for our sake but for the ones who are going to come after us. People should not allow such plan to be carried on without any protests. Hence, some of the locals have decided to organize a protest in the park to raise awareness about the situation and gain more followers to prevent the execution of the plan.
Sincerely yours,
Behnaz Yousefi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Behnaz Yousefi. I live in Gre...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'block' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'blocks'.
Suggestion: blocks
...z Yousefi. I live in Greet Street on 12 block located opposite of the park, next to t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... on the livelihood of the neighborhood. We are responsible for preserving our en...
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Line 13, column 202, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...carried on without any protests. Hence, some of the locals have decided to organize a prote...
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Line 17, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion of the plan. Sincerely yours, Behnaz Yousefi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, hence, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 26.3917525773 182% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 266.0 206.0 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55263157895 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46900911145 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 127.690721649 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62030075188 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 290.88556701 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6342155807 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7333333333 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26666666667 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163375376033 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417191830301 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509156800897 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969127661871 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546821587359 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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