A while ago you have lent a friend a suitcase, which he/she has not returned yet. Write a letter to him/her reminding to bring it back and say
- What suitcase and when did he/she borrow it?
- Why do you need it back?
- What should he/she do about it?
Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you in the best of your health. It's been quite long since we have met each other, owing to our sedentary lifestyle. You will be delighted to know that I'm going to Paris in the next two days for one year on a business visa. While I was packing all my necessary documents, I felt the need of my American tourist's red suitcase which I lent to you five months back.
If you remember, during your visit to my place in the summers, you borrowed this suitcase from me as you were unable to pack your important files. I require this specific suitcase due to a number of reasons. Primarily, it is equipped with various security features such as code locks and hidden pockets, which are quintessential as I am carrying some confidential company papers with me. Additionally, it is made up of water-proof leather and as you might know, these kinds of cases are expensive to buy.
Coincidently, my cousin Riya is in your town and she is returning back by tomorrow evening, therefore, I urge you to hand-over my suitcase to her at the airport by 5 pm. She is boarding Air India Flight at 8 pm and you can contact her at 987654432.
Hope to see you soon.
Yours loving,
Prabh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...yle. You will be delighted to know that Im going to Paris in the next two days for...
^^
Line 13, column 57, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returning'.
Suggestion: returning
... cousin Riya is in your town and she is returning back by tomorrow evening, therefore, I urge ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5520361991 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61492269168 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68778280543 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4008239571 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8333333333 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207297323807 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670121823435 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522076751095 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121318213979 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404056277509 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.