Most societies has its homeless people. Some people think that the best way to help them is to give them money. To what extent do you agree?
A section of society asserts that homeless people must be given financial help. In my opinion, I agree with this partially as a myopic solution because people without any shelter of their own should be encouraged for education or their skills should be enhanced to help them settle in long term.
To begin with, people who don't have any place to stay are very unfortunate and it is the duty of the society to extend their helping hand to make them available what they are derived of. Any kind of finance is always appreciated hence the near term needs are fulfilled. Clothes, food and shelter are the basic need necessities of any human being for survival. For example, many charitable organisations raise money to help such people.
Nevertheless, from an enlightened standpoint, government and charitable organisations should focus more on the strategic solution of this problem. They need to be provided with education and followed by other professional skills which will eventually nake them self sufficient and not dependent on any kind of donations. For example, governments should open up training centres which would emphasise on building the relevant skills which the homeless people can learn. These training facilities should provide shelter, food and relevant training which will help these people to overcome the fear and be confident that they can earn and will be respected in the society. Therefore, by the government's planning and execution of different schemes can help anybody to again earn for themselves and also gain respect in society.
In conclusion, to deal with this problem of the society where some people have no access to the house, creating a proper plan and right execution of such plans can reduce or remove the problem completely from the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15068493151 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68920019906 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565068493151 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0733990526 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.333333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162538167675 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630347084386 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547074370541 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105798742024 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430475522891 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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