Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television strongly influence the way people behave? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
Many people think that movies and television do not affect their way of living and behavior. However, I believe that movies, television, and other social media strongly affect the behavior of people who consume it. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, movies and television affect the behavior of people because the morals and principles shown are adopted by the young generations. For instance, nowadays many television shows display that bullying is not the correct way of doing things in schools and colleges. Consequently, the children who watch it learn that bullying not a good thing at a younger age. Moreover, it is important that the younger generation is exposed to all the positive morals and principles of society because their brain is currently at a developing stage. So it is vital for them to learn these things right away.
Second of all, sometimes movies and television have a bad influence on people. There are many characters portrayed in the films which promote violence. People tend to follow them thinking that nothing is wrong in that. For example, during my college days, my roommate was a fan of such character and following this character changed him drastically but in a bad way. During his first year, he was a straight-As student but since the time he started to drink and smoke, his performance had a steep fall. He was once a topper of the class and now he is the only guy in our class who has not bagged a job. Had he not watched those movies, he would be in a good state of living now.
In conclusion, I believe that movies, television, and other media strongly affect the people who consume them. This is because they present the morals and values of the society which are followed by the people and the portrayal of characters which acts as a role model for many people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, moreover, second, so, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74923547401 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54293803862 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507645259939 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7493194457 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3529411765 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156262619839 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556823552972 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571412127327 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873845372693 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646014747495 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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