The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
There is no doubt that social networking and relationship are of a great importance. Specially nowadays, the need of a good and healthy relationship is among hot debates and most people are concerned about it and realy care about it. One of the aspects of relationship is the possibility of making friend and the ability to maintaning the relationship. I personally belive that even thogh having longterm frienships are crucial but, the ability to make new friends as much as possible is more important. According in what follows, I will try to provide some cognet reasons to support my statement.
First and foremost, making new friends can lead to be in relation with new people with different traits, which in general helps us to have a better social relationships. As a result, better social interactions are one of the reasons that helps people to be happy. As a case in point, I can remember a time when I was in college and I have been so eager to find as much as possible friends. At tat time that was like a challenge to myself but now after almost ten years later I can see that how those many friends back in college helped me to be more social and even more succesfull in my life and career.
The other equally important reason which I like to present is that even old friendships are gold, however, the endeavor to find new friend is an interesting and fun process which also, can lead to a person's happiness. To be more specific, when we want to make new friends we try to improve our personality, be more attractive and reducing our shiness. Therefore all these things are good actions which help us to be more active and realistic which are the basis of happiness.
All in all, I think it is vital for a person to be in close relationships with a small group of people but the ability of making new friend to more important and makes people happier. I believe this is because we can be in cinnetion with more variety of people and the prosecc of making new frinds is a healthy anf helpfull action to be more happy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 200, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...d fun process which also, can lead to a persons happiness. To be more specific, when we...
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Line 9, column 353, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...re attractive and reducing our shiness. Therefore all these things are good actions which...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, i think, in general, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53658536585 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65456803321 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487804878049 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.7323268299 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.571428571 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3571428571 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281353693672 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982598090166 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916535018678 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180930557811 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762278775861 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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