Children are face educational, social and commercial pressures. What are the causes of these pressures? What
measures should be taken to reduce them?
Adults often complain about their excessive stress in life and envy children since they do not need to worry about their livelihood in that age. However, many children are also face lots of pressure from school, society and even from their family. This essay will discuss the causes of this phenomenon and try to provide some measures to reduce these pressures.
To explain why kids are facing pressure from academic, social and commercial aspect is simple. First of all, although most of parents have shouldered all their kids life cost but what kids want are still not easy to satisfied. It too easy to them to see advertisement from TV and wish to buying expensive cloth or shoes. Some children like to compete with others, so they ask their parents to buy things that exceed expectations. Once they can’t be satisfied, they feel unhappy and gain commercial pressures. Moreover, some parents push their kids so hard which become the main source of stress for their children. The parents’ unrealistic expectations will make their kids sad since it is impossible for them to get reward and praise from family. Finally, student also face peer pressure in school. And this may cause conflicts and stress.
It is not easy to find simple measures to solve this issue. To begin with, parents need to set an appropriate expectations for their children. It is necessary to always give reward and praise which will encourage kids to make progress in study or daily life. Also, parents and teachers need to spend more patient with kids instead of refusing to listen to their needs.
Overall, it is hard to reduce kids’ pressure since we live in a world which go faster and faster. Both adults and children are need to keep pace with the changing world, and they have to work hard to avoid be thrown away from others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'faced'.
Suggestion: faced
...at age. However, many children are also face lots of pressure from school, society a...
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Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the parents') or simply say ''most parents''.
Suggestion: most of the parents; most parents
...spect is simple. First of all, although most of parents have shouldered all their kids life cos...
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Line 9, column 111, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'expectation'?
Suggestion: expectation
...ith, parents need to set an appropriate expectations for their children. It is necessary to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87539936102 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43025380832 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555910543131 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3259794378 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.7777777778 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3888888889 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189700814135 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601609797397 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470574856426 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108616859138 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549990363133 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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