Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? My lifestyle is easier and more comfortable than the one my grandparents experienced when they were young. Use specific details and examples to support your answer.
Many people believe that today's lifestyle is more hectic. They cite internet addiction and traffic on roads. However, I agree with the statement that my lifestyle is far more comfortable and calmer than the one my grandparents experienced when they were young. I believe the same for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, my lifestyle is better than what my grandparents experienced because I get more free time to relax and enjoy holidays. For example, my grandparents used to work six days a week with more than 50 hours a week and sometimes even did overtime. Whereas, I work for five days a week with around 36 hours a week. Thus, I get more time to spend on things that my grandparents were not able to do. Like, going on a vacation every month to rejuvenate me, exploring one's hobby, and spending much time with the family. Owing to the rise of industrialization, I have to work for fewer hours and still get paid more than what my grandparents earned during their working days. So, I feel that I have a much comfortable life than what my grandparents had been through.
Second of all, I feel that my lifestyle is less stressful because the means of transportation has improved to a greater extent then what it was during the time when my grandparents were young. For instance, we can travel to our hometown much faster than when my grandparents young. Besides, not only the modes of traveling has improved but the availability and booking of the vehicles have gotten better too. Back in the day, booking a cab from the railway station to our home used to be so hard, but now, thanks to the internet, everything happens at my fingertips.
In conclusion, I feel that I am living a far better life than what my grandparents had lived because of less workload in my office and it is now easy to travel to any place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
Many people believe that todays lifestyle is more hectic. They cite int...
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Line 5, column 471, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...every month to rejuvenate me, exploring ones hobby, and spending much time with the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, second, so, still, then, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60960960961 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75867304036 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504504504505 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9447180823 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9375 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.45110844103 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389951587685 0.236089414692 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137707674644 0.076458572812 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131301332625 0.0737576698707 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246886160971 0.150856017488 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10117499714 0.0645574589148 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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