Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone's life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the contemporary, advertising is becoming increasingly universal around the world, which impacts on almost of aspects of human’s life significantly. A portion argues that this tendency would bring more positivity to the societies. Personally judging, a partial agreement is the point of view as the phenomenon possesses disadvantages rather than advantages in the whole of the circumstance.
On the one hand, observing positive dimensions, advertisements provide useful information about products or services which are available on the market. In detail, when someone may be planning to book the holiday of a lifetime, informative advertising could help the customers make the right choice suit their needs in a bewildering range of possible destinations. Moreover, in order to provide detailed specifications of products effectively, advertising would convey sufficient information from the manufactures to the customers via media platforms, which helps potential buyers compare their functions and prices easily to choose the most suitable ones.
On the other hand, considering the negative aspects, some advertising is largely unnecessary and intrusive, which wastes time and money. Firstly, someone regularly receives telesales marketing calls when they are busy to convince the potential consumers to buy an unwanted product such as a new house. In Vietnam, this tendency is quite popular, which leaves a sense of tiredness when they have to answer many advertising calls on a daily basis. Secondly, many advertisements provide false information or exaggerate the benefits of the products, which leads to deleterious complaints after paying a great amount of money.
In conclusion, advertising is a good means to provide helpful information for the customers, but it is becoming increasingly negative in some extent when people receive more drawbacks than its benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 400, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tages in the whole of the circumstance. On the one hand, observing positive dime...
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Line 9, column 399, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'answer'.
Suggestion: answer
... a sense of tiredness when they have to answers many advertising calls on a daily basis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79285714286 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23635085192 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621428571429 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.3063343201 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.454545455 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36363636364 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139750887971 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548060509697 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340165483467 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881901624907 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146025349571 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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