Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Defroestation for human needs have become a very common problem now. Many social activists are raising their voice against it. In my opinion, I do not agree that human needs are more important than lives of many endagered animals. This due to the fact that when some species get extinct it have huge negative impact on human life and
future generation of human race faces severe problems.
When we cut down the trees and forest areas life of many species become ended. According to Darwin, it effects the whole food chain and biological cycle. We Humans are also a part of the food chain and biological cycle may face severe consequences. Example long time ago people in china killed sparrows as they were damaging their crops. But soon they realised that sparrwos are responsible for eating many insects that cause damage to many other crops. It caused more damage to china rather than benefitting them. In many countries some of the animals which are about to extinct and rare species attract lot of tourists from world wide. This generates huge revenue for those countries and many people gets their livelihood because of these animals. Many commercial are made from animals like leather jackets, coats and sweaters. Some of the medicines that cures cancer and many life threating diseases are made from animals. So we humans get effected negatively in many ways by taking the land away from animals and causing them to become extint.
Cutting the land for human needs effects the other animals and future generation of human race. Many animals for responsible for the growth of plants indirectly. By cutting the land for our needs we are not only causing harm to animals we are causing harm to ourselves. Example when the animals that are responsible for the rain become extint we do not receive appropriate amount of rainfall due to the decrease in number of trees. It may have more impact on our agricultre and many rivers get dried. in many countries electricity is generated from rivers by establishing huge turbines over them. Lack of water in rivers creates shortage for the electricity which is a huge loss for industries. Also global warming and melting of glaciers of take place due to the extint of animals that are responsible for the growth of trees.
Finally by cutting the land which is required for the survial of animals we are creating more problems to ourselves. We should save the land for many endangered species and also take care of their growth. In future, with increase in use of science and technology we may discover many methods to increase agricultural output and build more number of houses without using extra land.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2222.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91592920354 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4129319068 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471238938053 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 718.2 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6286451761 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4615384615 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3846153846 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76923076923 5.45110844103 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210636059603 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067973872225 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556131373536 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130210508448 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593077856039 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.