Getting into the Flow
Some times you determine yourself in the middle of circumstances that you have been gripped into a difficult and aching experience. A musician once plays fiercely his favorite music, a soccer player while absorbed in clearing a ball right upon their goal line and thinking about worthwhile Olympic medal, an artist during her first fulfilled performance can be involved in this situation. All of them have lost passing the time. Although, these interval can be painful and arduous, meanwhile, their feedback are great.
These moments occur several times in our lives and In contrary of many thoughts, they are not inactive, receptive, relaxing times. For instance a soccer player during the competition might have lots of ache in his lung and feet. nevertheless, not only he does not remember this experience as a tough time, but probably he will reminisce it as the best moment in his life. Psychologists believe that absorbing in an action intellectually, socially, or physically, is been called state of flow. Latest researches has divided the people to low-flow and high-flow types. High-flow people feel lower level of fun, Whereas low-flow individuals activities are included more funny amusements such as games, TV and socializing.
To conclude, having an aim to achieve, and enduring lots of pressure, tension or stress are obligatory prerequisites of getting high-flow states and end up successfully.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this interval' or 'these intervals'?
Suggestion: this interval; these intervals
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Suggestion:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun ache seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of aches'.
Suggestion: lots of aches
...layer during the competition might have lots of ache in his lung and feet. nevertheless, not...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nevertheless
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Latest'.
Suggestion: The Latest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, nevertheless, so, whereas, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 224.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3125 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93053070349 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.709821428571 0.580463131201 122% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1006102836 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.181818182 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.25397266985 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203325440689 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633596022562 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768417307444 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119451573763 0.151781067708 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592240705092 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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