You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You rent a four-bedroom house, which you share with two other students. However, there are several problems with this house that need fixing. You also find it expensive and would like to find another student to share the spare bedroom.
Write a letter to the estate agency. In the letter
• explain your situation
• describe the problems
• say what you would like to happen
Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to let you know that the house in which we are living has many problems. Myself and two other students are sharing this house. We are facing electricity issues for the past few days.
We often experience power fluctuations in our house mostly at night. We go to the college during the day and study at night. Since we have exams on coming week, the frequent fluctuations disturbs our studies a lot. We tried to find an electrician to fix the problem but could not do so. Likewise, there is another problem to fix such as water leakage. We would request you to resolve the problems at the earliest.
Moreover, the house has four bedrooms and only three of us are living in it. The rent is also very high and if another person accommodates, we could share the rent which would helps us to save some money.
Please do the needful in this regard. Looking forward to hear from you.
Thank you,
Yours faithfully,
Albon
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to let you know...
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Line 9, column 70, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ctuations in our house mostly at night. We go to the college during the day and st...
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Line 13, column 177, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...es, we could share the rent which would helps us to save some money. Please do ...
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Line 17, column 55, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...needful in this regard. Looking forward to hear from you. Thank you, Yours ...
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Line 21, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rward to hear from you. Thank you, Yours faithfully, Albon
^^^^^^^
Line 25, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Thank you, Yours faithfully, Albon
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, look, moreover, so, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66857142857 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35824909107 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.189433722 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.3571428571 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278852503874 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940782072052 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727781351039 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162933999214 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490471247742 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.