The first chart bellow shows how energy is used in an average Australian household.The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy used
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant
The pie charts illustrate information about energy consumed in an average household of australian and the amount of greenhouse gas eliminated by utilizing power.
Basically, the amount of using refrigeration, lighting, heating and other appliances " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"have a difference with the number of sending out, while water heating and cooling almost the same between two charts.
heating is the greatest percentage in the first chart with 42% however it uses a haft gas with consuming. There is a contrast in the second chart. other appliances have a largest number of sending out gas but australian use this energies little which just occupy 15% in the first chart . it is similar with lighting and refrigeration, it also has a bigger figure of utilizing of lighting than refrigeration.
In the first chart, water heating has 30% and it is the second large number. water heating just increases 2% but it also is the biggest percentage in the second chart. australian use a little energy for cooling so it just send out 3% gas to environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Heating
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...uses a haft gas with consuming. There is a contrast in the second chart. other ap...
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...the second chart. other appliances have a largest number of sending out gas but a...
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...which just occupy 15% in the first chart . it is similar with lighting and refrig...
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...ch just occupy 15% in the first chart . it is similar with lighting and refrigera...
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... chart . it is similar with lighting and refrigeration, it also has a bigger figu...
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Suggestion: Water
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...biggest percentage in the second chart. australian use a little energy for cooling so it ...
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...stralian use a little energy for cooling so it just send out 3% gas to environmen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36956521739 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21858191442 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570652173913 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.3894991708 43.030603864 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.777777778 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254563190524 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134044272263 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895600597005 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179480708969 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10323237725 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.