Eco certification vs not. TPO7 integrated writing
The reading passage and lecture have conflicting opinions about whether or not it a better idea to use eco-certification in the wood companies. The author strongly postulates that this label is widely used in other countries, but in America, it is a whole different story. On the other hand, the listening adamantly delineates that there are several benefits because of three compelling reasons. First and foremost, according to the author of the excerpt, having an eco-certification tag doesn't appeal clients and cause it more unworthy because most of the americans believe that it is an advertisement of these companies. Nonetheless, the lecture offsets these points by declaring that american buyers will perceive it is the identities of these companies rather than commercials. Therefore, they will certainly accept it more favourably because of the companies' international reputation. Secondly, the professor in the lecture further asserts that everyone does care prices to some degree so it does not influence too much on the consumer's choices. Furthermore, he points out that americans appreciate the things which contribute to the protection of the environment. these claims refute the writer's implications about consumers don't want to buy costly products because the companies need to pay more money on the examination of eco-certification; as a result, they have to increase its costs. Moreover, the author believes that corporations need to pay attention to the prices to keep them low rather than try to acquire certification. The article strongly points out that the business owners expect that they will sell their products in the international market, but in this business area, most of the consumers are domestic ones. it goes without saying that they need to work to fulfil the demands of their domestic consumers. The speaker in the listening counters these indications by insisting that it is crucial to know about how international companies appeal their buyers in this wood business, so they can avoid any risks of dominating their domestic markets by global companies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...lecture have conflicting opinions about whether or not it a better idea to use eco-certificati...
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Line 1, column 489, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...xcerpt, having an eco-certification tag doesnt appeal clients and cause it more unwort...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 1171, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...e to the protection of the environment. these claims refute the writers implications ...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 1232, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...he writers implications about consumers dont want to buy costly products because the...
^^^^
Line 1, column 1736, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ost of the consumers are domestic ones. it goes without saying that they need to w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 22.412803532 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 30.3222958057 148% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1373.03311258 128% => OK
No of words: 329.0 270.72406181 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3556231003 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08412549726 2.5805825403 120% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 145.348785872 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537993920973 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 419.366225166 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9612816478 49.2860985944 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.538461538 110.228320801 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3076923077 21.698381199 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06452816374 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.09492273731 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0499221719765 0.272083759551 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0178015356873 0.0996497079465 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354648336165 0.0662205650399 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0499221719765 0.162205337803 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.3589403974 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.8541721854 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.0289183223 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.2367328918 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 63.6247240618 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.7273730684 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
Read sample essays from ETS:
http://www.testbig.com/users/toeflwritingmaster
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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