parents should be held legally responsible their children act? what is your opinion . support it with personal examples.
The importance of parenting of child which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked, the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion the former preposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favoring the positive impact on this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
First and foremost parents are legally responsible for children behavior. There are different types of families belonging in my country. High, middle, low. Mostly now days peoples are highly educated. They are providing best guidance to their kids. They provide better education as compared to the other parents. On the other hand , poor people do not provide good education to the children as compared to the other children.
Last and foremost, parents are also responsible for children activities. mother is the first teacher to their kids. They imparts good habits in child. On the other hand, children easily adopt bad things as compared to the good ones.
According to the my points of view, children can adopts good thing from their parents. Because parents is the first teacher to the children. They learns a number of thing in their childhood age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, thus, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 220.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16363636364 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56796001209 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.5024630542 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0436721105 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.1111111111 104.977214359 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2222222222 20.9669160288 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.25397266985 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.33497536946 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171725544947 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565997420473 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611305191495 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10846262138 0.151781067708 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283163187076 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 12.6369458128 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 53.1260098522 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.9458128079 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.76 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.3980295567 65% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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