Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I agree that the friends can have more effect than the teachers on students and friends could take the lead on students mind as leaders and models.

that couldbe because of age. So students take friends as allies and think of teachers as enemies or maybe outsiders. for example when I was young I had a humor friend, back then he made funy jokes an affected class by intrupting teachers. and not only me but all other students accepted him as a role. the teachers try hard to stop that kind of behavior but support and incureg he ressived from us was a fule for his intruptions then some teachers stoped to coming to our class and new teacher have more trubble than old ones.

Other problem is that students spend more time with friends than with teachurs and it could made the gap between them. students are in the same classes for hours and then in the campus and even out of school they see each other so there is a good time for dominant characters to affect friends and Ishoul say that I can't see how a techer could compete with this opponents so there is more to do for regulat teacher and student bond and make teacher more influential on students than friends and we should take in mind that fore a good achivement families need to enter in this problem too and play they rules

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: That
...students mind as leaders and models. that couldbe because of age. So students tak...
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Suggestion: For
...teachers as enemies or maybe outsiders. for example when I was young I had a humor ...
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Suggestion: And
... affected class by intrupting teachers. and not only me but all other students acce...
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Suggestion: The
... other students accepted him as a role. the teachers try hard to stop that kind of ...
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Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...friends than with teachurs and it could made the gap between them. students are in t...
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Suggestion: Students
...and it could made the gap between them. students are in the same classes for hours and t...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...to affect friends and Ishoul say that I cant see how a techer could compete with thi...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ant see how a techer could compete with this opponents so there is more to do for re...
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Line 5, column 495, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...influential on students than friends and we should take in mind that fore a good ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, so, then, for example, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 52.1666666667 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 1977.66487455 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 239.0 407.700716846 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39748953975 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17426728926 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569037656904 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 618.680645161 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.384509293 48.9658058833 279% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 131.375 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.875 20.6045352989 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199458160329 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862923307687 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568432214455 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147656537014 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.011818933136 0.0645574589148 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 58.1214874552 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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