In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.
Everyday many people are migrating to big cites from the rural area for a better life style. It is nearly impossible to build or buy a house in the city for each family due to limited geographical space for construction. Owning a house is on the wish list of most people. This wish, however, can lead to trouble, if people stretch their finances to fulfill it. The property in the cities are expensive to buy and not affordable for an average salaried person.
The other alternate of having your own house is to build the one in outskirt of the city or in the countryside. There are many advantages of building a house near the countryside. The biggest advantages of building a house at the countryside are affordable land prices and lot of available space for the construction. While majority of the people prefer staying in the towns and this has become a trend for everyone to run towards the cities for a better education and health benefits. This is impacting the growth of rural area, still their majority of the economy is based on agriculture. Development of new houses near the countryside would contribute towards their economy and growth. There are other benefits staying at rural areas are like less pollution, cheap organic vegetables and lot of space for morning walk and exercise.
On the other hand, there are some people who believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new houses there. I understand their point of view from the direction of not spoiling the natural beauty of the countryside. However, authorities can take other strong measures to enforce the rules of keeping the countryside clean and green. I strongly believe, moving to countryside is a solution not a problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
Everyday many people are migrating to big cites ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...able for an average salaried person. The other alternate of having your own h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93581081081 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73460687867 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506756756757 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6431247299 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3125 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3125 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280280997916 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924065185347 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105166299526 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191181136504 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529486621933 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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