You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use
for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.
In your letter
• describe the problem with the equipment
• explain how this problem is affecting your work
• say what you want the shop or company to do
Laptop ram problem, computer is getting slow, and wasting a lot of time.
Add more ram or too enhance the speed
Dear Sir,
I am Rehan Yousaf, an employee of the S&P Global Marketing Intelligence, one of your client. I am writing to you to ask for your assistance regarding the damaged RAM of my laptop.
I am provided by a laptop from my company, S&P Global Marketing Intelligence, to assist me in telecommuting. However, the RAM of the laptop is not functioning properly, and the system is getting slower with time. Since the deadline for a project is not far away, slowness can result in this deadline to be missed. Missing this deadline can result in a penalty of USD 10K as per one of the clauses of the contract.
Therefore, I would request you to please provide me with a new RAM to increase the efficiency of my laptop. I am using Dell Aspiron 544 Core 5, the motherboard of this supports DDR 2 RAM.
I hope you will empathise my situation and would provide me with the required item.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Rehan Yousaf
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir, I am Rehan Yousaf, an employee of the S&...
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...garding the damaged RAM of my laptop. I am provided by a laptop from my compan...
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...ing the damaged RAM of my laptop. I am provided by a laptop from my company...
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...r one of the clauses of the contract. Therefore, I would request you to please...
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... Aspiron 544 Core 5, the motherboard of this supports DDR 2 RAM. I hope you wi...
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...therboard of this supports DDR 2 RAM. I hope you will empathise my situation a...
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...ld provide me with the required item. I look forward to hearing from you. ...
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...rovide me with the required item. I look forward to hearing from you. ...
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... I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Rehan Yousaf
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...ing from you. Yours faithfully, Rehan Yousaf
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, regarding, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72674418605 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79216894357 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.6224978621 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.9090909091 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121193916141 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514948933993 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312967131718 0.0603063233224 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731411723339 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192037651657 0.0580467560999 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.