Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays increasing communication and reinforcement of the relationship between countries make the accessibility to goods and products so easy. However, I do believe, it would have negative impacts on the economy and culture of countries.
Firstly, the economic aspects of this issue could be devastating. Actually, with purchasing products and goods such as a car, a large amount of money should be exited from the country. For example in my country Iran, there are some car factories which they can produce appropriate and high-quality cars but some people by buying foreigner not only damaging to the national currency but also they are weakening national production.
Secondly, culture is in danger of new products. As a matter of fact, the culture of countries are different and they have their own customs and traditions which effects on producing the products. With the accessibility to new products, the regulations and rules of these cultures might simply be broken. As an example in Iran, by the entrance of barby, a beautiful and nice American dull girls, most children bought this dull. However, all parents and also the government have a completion due to the features of dull which would not be suitable for our culture and our kinds as we are Muslims.
In contrast, some people argue that the same products in every place are a kind of equality in society although I think this equality could be defined and described in different ways. For instance, instead of foreigner products which have strange culture and high cost, the countries can produce local and national products with the same quality but by respect to the economy and culture.
In conclusion, in my opinion, accessibility to the same products everywhere can put a lot of strain on the culture and economy of countries and could be substituted by other national products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, such as, as a matter of fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10491803279 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85039684267 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52131147541 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.584389905 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.769230769 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4615384615 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131874209099 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474722484952 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376330399791 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850122233019 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429656549428 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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