Fossil fuels are the main source of energy around the world. However, people are being encouraged to use alternative energy sources such as wind energy, solar energy and so on. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Why?
Nowadays, amid mounting concern about environmental issues, renewable energy resources like solar, wind or water power are attracting more attention than ever before. Although it is still somewhat questionable as to whether these types of energy resources are sustainable or not in the true sense, I personally believe that such a trend would be generally a positive development.
There is no doubt that there are a number of disadvantages with traditional major energy sources. It has been a long time since the possibility of fossil fuels like coal or petroleum being depleted in the near future was pointed out. The scarcity of oil resources can sometimes trigger wars and armed conflicts, as evidenced by the Gulf War in 1911 and the Iraq War from 2003 to 2011. In addition, it has been known for a long time that global warming caused by the use of fossil fuels has caused extreme weather, resulting in a great negative impact on people's lives. In this respect, the advantages of alternative energy are seemingly apparent. In other words, the energy source is virtually inexhaustible, and in addition, the environmental load is much lower than that of conventional energy.
That being said, it goes without saying that renewable energy is by no means innocent. For example, increased temperatures around solar power generation facilities have been reported, which leads to deterioration in the living environment of local residents. Landscape destruction by alternative energy power generation facilities is also a major problem. Because of these problems, the number of legal disputes between power companies and local residents over the construction of renewable energy power generation facilities has recently increased. Nevertheless, the fact remains that renewable energy is the most promising alternative at the moment.
In conclusion, although it should be recognised that renewable energy can also have some drawbacks, in order to overcome the problem of conventional energy, increasing dependence on such alternative energy is a desirable change.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...hough it is still somewhat questionable as to whether these types of energy resources are sus...
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Line 5, column 648, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ernative energy are seemingly apparent. In other words, the energy source is virtu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, nevertheless, so, still, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46728971963 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03957265922 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579439252336 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1441558263 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.357142857 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311425004554 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103789192461 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517518213374 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177840989722 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264185141402 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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