It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is clear that the old debate about the origin of talents has existed for a long time. While some people believe that these properties are established by nature, I think the continuous self-development is the only path to be such a transcendent person. In this essay I will discuss both opinions.
Considering, the genetic information plays a predominant role in forming both extrinsic and intrinsic characteristics for a human. Consequently, the thinking process is influenced vastly as well. As a result, the intellectual capabilities differ from one man to another. Thus, we could see excel one who is distinguished in a far distance from his colleagues. For instance, although Beethoven, the outstanding musician throughout the history, was a deaf, his brilliance had arisen from his depths.
On the other hand, the importance of acquisition of new merits is undeniable. Correspondingly, the schools and educational entities have undertaken the responsibilities to seed the new skills to both youths or adults. Conversely, if the talents are exclusive to those who are born with them, many vital sciences like teaching and coaching would be useless. Otherwise, these training setups have succeeded incredibly in building up numerous talented persons. For example, we could see many of eminent sportsmen who have achieved a marvelous success in their career, despite their families' ordinariness.
In conclusion, the concept of being exquisite is essentially depending on your effort rather than your fortune. However, inherited features cannot be neglected in term of differences of thinking and behavior, they have been represented a small fraction of the whole picture. Therefore, the dedication and catching your aspiration are the reliable methods to reach your goals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 47, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...clusion, the concept of being exquisite is essentially depending on your effort rather than your fortune...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, conversely, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53090909091 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25418992471 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676363636364 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1167138803 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0625 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157206164442 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041087566507 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357599859489 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874167860027 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502154008693 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.51 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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