Some people think public health is the responsibility of the government while others think that people should be responsible for ties own health
Discuss Anthe sides and give your opinion
As authorities are more concerned about the healthy life of the citizens many of developed countries budget higher amounts for health-related campaigns focusing the development in the long run. Some people are on the opinion that providing health services is the sole duty administrative while others argue that it's on the shoulder of people. I have a balanced view on this as both are equally responsible for bringing fitness.
Firstly, the major reason why authorities have to give medical and other health service is that they are capable of meeting their requirements more effectively. In other words, to make sure the well-being of citizens the governments save to run hospitals, sports centres and recreational facilities followed by proper distribution of healthy alternatives. When these prerequisite are taken into the account of individuals it would be a herculean task to meet. Hence, authorities have the privilege to make these needs as easy as a piece of cake.
Secondly, the role of individuals in leading a healthy life is unquestionably in the case lifestyle. To put it another way, it is possible for each individual to follow the regular pattern of a healthy diet on time, proper exercises and maintaining sound relationships. Majority of people are aware of the importance of keeping these things as it is proved in the life successful personalities. Implementing their requirements is solemnly depended on each person unlikely to the rulers.
To conclude, by analysing both the sides of the topic, one could say that the collaborative movements from both the governments and citizens like providing all amenities and keeping good lifestyle only bring a healthy society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31851851852 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14988187555 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588888888889 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7704203768 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.666666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1782684799 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565333017397 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608557852961 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958163177252 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736827154512 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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