Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge.
The pervasive spread of the Internet around the world made the diffusion of the culture much easier and faster than before. Nowadays it's very easy to obtain in a few seconds any kind of book or song, even those who are protected by copyright. I think this tendency is negative at first but, on the long term it can boost the legal digital market of artistic contents.
Every market needs to be profitable: the music and the book industry are not exceptions. The authors are not amateurs and they have the right to have an income to sustain themself and to keep doing their artistic activity on a full time basis. With the possibility to take every content for free, the quality of the contents itself is destined to decline, because nobody is committed to invest energy, time and money without a return. For instance, we are witnessing a dramatic decline in the purchases of new CDs and concerts' tickets, because a growing number of people does not want to pay for music; even the readers are in constant decline a bit everywhere for the same reasons.
Some people argue that the diffusion of digital contents on on the web is positive for the cultural enrichment of many individuals who does not have an easy access to the legal market, due to environmental or economic reasons. This statement is true, but if all the consumers were acting in this way, the market would collapse in a few time. Indeed, the market has adapted itself to an increasingly demand of digital music and sound, providing them legally, instead breaching the legit rights of the authors. The services who offer legal music or streaming download are undoubtedly increasing as well as the offer of ebooks, so the overall cost for the final customer is declining considering that a digital copy is much cheaper than a phisyc one.
To sum up, the diffusion of copyrighted material for free is a negative trend because basically it harms the authors' income and the overall health of the market, but, on the same it can improve de overall demand of legal songs and books.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...keep doing their artistic activity on a full time basis. With the possibility to take eve...
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Line 9, column 58, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: on
... that the diffusion of digital contents on on the web is positive for the cultural en...
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Line 9, column 150, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'easy access'.
Suggestion: easy access
...t of many individuals who does not have an easy access to the legal market, due to environment...
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Line 9, column 333, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'few times'.
Suggestion: few times
...his way, the market would collapse in a few time. Indeed, the market has adapted itself ...
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Line 9, column 384, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('increasingly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('demand') instead of another adjective.
...ndeed, the market has adapted itself to an increasingly demand of digital music and sound, providing t...
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Line 13, column 110, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...ve trend because basically it harms the authors income and the overall health of the ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, well, for instance, i think, kind of, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74022346369 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52063206962 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550279329609 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.5590276673 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.416666667 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8333333333 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201742643072 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647423625535 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048838967527 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109469781581 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285431486006 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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