Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you left the plane, you left a bag. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel.
Write a letter to the airline. In your letter.
*explain what has happened
*describe the bag and its contents
*say what you would like them to do about it
Hello Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you with regard to my baggage that I left on the plane last week.
My name is Tomasz Zawadzki and last week I was flying back from my holiday to London. My flight details are arriving time 9.45 pm on London’s airport, flight number is NB4560. I was in rush the time when I was leaving the plane because, of an information about my dad’s accident that I received just before boarding. I realized about the missing back just after few days, when I was looking for my photo ID.
Thus, my bag is in red color with big gold button on top of the lid. Inside the bag I have many personal belongings such as my holiday credit card, my photo ID, sunglasses, jumper and old watch.
I really appreciate if you could call me or send me a message if you have found my bag. My phone number is 567987456.
I humbly thankful in forward.
I am look forward to hearing from you.
Your sincerely,
Tomasz Zawadzki
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 97, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'belongings'.
Suggestion: belongings
... of the lid. Inside the bag I have many personal belongings such as my holiday credit card, my phot...
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Line 27, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hearing from you. Your sincerely, Tomasz Zawadzki
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, thus, such as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54802259887 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42798541057 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632768361582 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0213902134 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0833333333 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214310243859 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078985305044 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743015731509 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121731373067 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084458774226 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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