In some countries children have very strict rules of behavior, in other countries, they are allowed to do almost anything they want. To what extent should children have to follow rules?
It is true that incredibly rigorous regulations in terms of the behavior of children have applied in a number of nations, while children are countenanced to make almost things they are fond of in other states. As far as I concerned, these stringent rules have both benefits as well as serious demerits as discussed below.
On the one hand, having strict regulations of behavior would help people in the world reap certain benefits due to the fact that these regulations would create a sense of responsibility and respectful children who are the prospective key of a country and in turn, mature into deferential to adults. Therefore, putting a code of conduct into practice results in shaping a stable community regardless children come from different strata, which is virtually immune from kinds of crimes related to misconduct such as humiliating behaviors and outrage. Without these rigorous rules, children would not obey their parents, teachers and hence, they would get out of hand and ignore their obligations imposed by parenthood and their society. These future citizens become indolence and irresponsibility to themselves, their family and motherland, which means they make a heavy burden to the government as well as the community where they are residing.
On the other hand, there is not always yield positive results as argued above when it comes to compelling children to abide by strict rules of behavior because most of the offenders having behaviors and wrongdoings against interests of the community are the consequences of excessively inflexible education method relying on such laws. This could be demonstrated by the rising number of juvenile delinquents, especially crimes in terms of violent acts, are due to the contents of such rules applying at schools and families sometimes consist of inflicting corporal punishment on children. Such rules encourage and show children that violence is an acceptable way to deal with problems. Likewise, making use of rigorous laws of behavior to treat children not only forms a sedentary lifestyle but also limits their creativity. That is the reason why in a group of nations, there are combinations between using strict regulations of behavior on children and letting them do something they want as long as they do not commit the crime.
In conclusion, it seems to me that besides the advantages of putting strict rules of behavior into practice on children, its negative effects should always be taken into consideration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, likewise, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2092.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24310776942 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90129669338 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546365914787 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 656.1 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.1124478752 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.333333333 106.682146367 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.25 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357876012728 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127686973499 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663299452418 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222457748137 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715630606039 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.0946893788 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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