Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates.
What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.
Over past few decades, global warming has been considered as the greatest challenges of human beings especially in this 21st Century. In addition to that, the levels of water in around the world oceans are rising continuously at the sharp rate. Because of these, ancient diseases may be released from the glacier. there are some plausible solutions to deal with all the problems, they, however, need the participation of everyone to overcome this such situations.
The rise of sea levels is one of natural signs for the global warming or in another name, Climate change. this situation occurs when the glaciers in both poles of our earth are melting. one possible outcome from that is the coastline erosion which will directly affect livelihoods of people who live by the ocean. Besides, an unfavorable condition which may happen is the exist of old-world disease. As the common concern, several researches provide the information of the ancient virus called Anthrax which will seriously harm all living creature in this world ecology. The biggest threat known as global warming has dramatic impact on all mankind.
Although those harmful drawbacks may take their places somehow, there are always some ways that serve perfectly as the solution of such kinds of problems. First, it is a necessity to fulfill and foster personal attitudes toward environment correctly and properly since there is a shared notion about how our lifestyle might affect the nature. After the gratitude is produced, we shall avoid the bad habits such as using tons of plastic bags, which play key role in global warming at the moment. Not only individuals should change themselves to help the world, but, bigger units like government or industry have to balance their service to overcome these problems as well.
In conclusion, then, as this essay discussed earlier, global warming and the rise of sea level contribute to the spread of archaic disease and may cause the land erosion in the place nearby. The plausible solution to resolve the associated situation is to have everyone involved and done a vital change with environmental-friendly attitudes toward problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, may, so, then, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24641833811 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68009572821 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621776504298 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7743636027 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.4375 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8125 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238846438944 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069368265913 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613217367436 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136452152038 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482920379567 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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