TPO44-Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Other believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are relate

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , parents
...ated and progressive world where we live,parents work so much and they have less time to...
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Suggestion: Recently
...less time to spend with their childrens.Recently,there has been a hot debate between peo...
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Suggestion: , there
...e to spend with their childrens.Recently,there has been a hot debate between people wh...
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Suggestion: From
... doing tasks that related to schoolwork.From my perspective,I prefer to parents play...
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Suggestion: , I
...elated to schoolwork.From my perspective,I prefer to parents play and have fun wit...
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Line 1, column 367, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'parent'.
Suggestion: parent
...oolwork.From my perspective,I prefer to parents play and have fun with their kids in th...
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Suggestion: On
...fun with their kids in their free times.On the countless reasons and examples,I wi...
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Suggestion: , I
...es.On the countless reasons and examples,I will present the most essential and con...
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Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , playing
...picuous ones here. To begin with,playing games or sport is nature of the kids.Th...
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Suggestion: The
...ng games or sport is nature of the kids.The always want to play and have fun,so the...
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Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , so
...ids.The always want to play and have fun,so they always looking for someone to play...
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Suggestion: It
...they always looking for someone to play.It is possible that find friends who are b...
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Line 7, column 272, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , so
... kids and play game and sports with them,so they dont have to play with others.My p...
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Suggestion: don't
... play game and sports with them,so they dont have to play with others.My personal ex...
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Suggestion: My
...m,so they dont have to play with others.My personal experience is compelling examp...
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Suggestion: When
...xperience is compelling example of this.When my cousin was 17 years old,his parents ...
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Line 7, column 395, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , his
... of this.When my cousin was 17 years old,his parents always was working,and didnt sp...
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Line 7, column 426, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , and
...years old,his parents always was working,and didnt spend time with him to play games...
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Line 7, column 431, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... old,his parents always was working,and didnt spend time with him to play games and s...
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Line 7, column 491, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , everyday
...h him to play games and sports.therefore,everyday he went to play yard and play with othe...
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Suggestion: There
...t to play yard and play with other kids.There was an adult man there.He always talked...
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Suggestion: He
...other kids.There was an adult man there.He always talked with childrens and gives ...
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Line 7, column 630, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , so
...ed with childrens and gives them candies,so childrens like him so much.One day,afte...
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Line 7, column 661, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: One
...m candies,so childrens like him so much.One day,after the game,he approached to my ...
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Suggestion: , after
...es,so childrens like him so much.One day,after the game,he approached to my cousin and...
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Suggestion: , he
... like him so much.One day,after the game,he approached to my cousin and gave him ca...
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Suggestion: Days
... and gave him candy and started to talk.Days passed away,they got closer and was spe...
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Suggestion: , they
...ndy and started to talk.Days passed away,they got closer and was spending so much tim...
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Suggestion: One
...s spending so much time with each other.One day I was sitting at home with my famil...
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Line 7, column 893, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'ring'
Suggestion: ring
... home with my family then the phone did rang.I answered the phone,my uncle was at th...
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Suggestion: I
... with my family then the phone did rang.I answered the phone,my uncle was at the ...
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Suggestion: , my
... the phone did rang.I answered the phone,my uncle was at the other side of the line...
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Suggestion: , So
...ld me to come hospital and he was crying,So we went there.My cousin was on the bed....
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...ital and he was crying,So we went there.My cousin was on the bed.when we asked the...
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Suggestion: , his
....when we asked them to what is happening,his father told us that an adult man give h...
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Line 7, column 1153, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'drugged'.
Suggestion: drugged
... an adult man give him candies that has drug inside it.Consequently,if his parent sp...
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Suggestion: Consequently
...ive him candies that has drug inside it.Consequently,if his parent spend their free time to ...
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Line 7, column 1180, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , if
...ies that has drug inside it.Consequently,if his parent spend their free time to pla...
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Suggestion: , their
... free time to play and have fun with him,their kids never went to play yard to play wi...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Last
...her kids and met with bad guys. last but not least,parents can teach new thi...
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Suggestion: , parents
...ith bad guys. last but not least,parents can teach new things to their children ...
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Suggestion: For
...heir children by playing game and sport.For instance,when parents have free time,th...
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Suggestion: , when
...n by playing game and sport.For instance,when parents have free time,they can go with...
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Suggestion: , they
...For instance,when parents have free time,they can go with theirs kids to sport yard a...
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Suggestion: With
...t yard and teach them how play football.With this method they can spend time with ki...
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Suggestion: , and
...e with kids and teach them something new,and emotionally support them.Moreover plyin...
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Suggestion: Moreover
...ething new,and emotionally support them.Moreover plying football is also good for childr...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ething new,and emotionally support them.Moreover plying football is also good for childr...
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Suggestion: They
...is also good for children's health.They muscles get strong and their body shape...
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Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'muscle'
Suggestion: muscle
...so good for children's health.They muscles get strong and their body shape get bet...
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Suggestion: , I
...rk more functionally. To wrap it up,I prefer to parents allocate their free t...
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Suggestion: Because
...s that related to their school works. because by doing that they can take care of the...
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Suggestion: don't
...hey can take care of their children and dont let to play with strangers.also,they ca...
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Suggestion: , they
...and dont let to play with strangers.also,they can teach them new skills with playing ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, for instance, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 13.8261648746 217% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 76.0 43.0788530466 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2232.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98214285714 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.001776552 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506696428571 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 89.0 20.1344086022 442% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 427.917281726 48.9658058833 874% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 446.4 100.406767564 445% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 89.6 20.6045352989 435% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.6 5.45110844103 341% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 54.0 5.5376344086 975% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339853559315 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.222144422441 0.076458572812 291% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652437736659 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222144422441 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652437736659 0.0645574589148 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 46.8 11.7677419355 398% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.94 58.1214874552 -3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 35.6 10.1575268817 350% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.79 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.94 8.01818996416 136% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 10.002688172 280% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 37.6 10.0537634409 374% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.