Homeschooling belongs to the past and is unacceptable in modern society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Use your own knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence
it is an undeniable fact that schooling schools play an important role in everyone,s life all over the world the reason that school giving education and it is necessary for everyone,s without education nobody successful.homeschooling was a remarkable idea in the past but today modern societies do not accepted .present days it is a bit popular .so due to this reason I partly agree with this statement.hence ,I shall explain about in upcoming paragraph .
To look at it one way ,in the contemporary era ,homeschooling is unacceptable because in the present scenario and everyone go to school and gain education .homeschooling present don't popular .in the past less number of people give education to their children .however ,the present every inhabitants around the planet are getting education method is not possible for instance ;one teacher live in India and they give homeschooling education for their country children .it is hard nut to crack .in fact the behind reason that one teacher how to possible teach all city students in one day .although,in case of school,it is not difficult to teach all city student in one day .secondly,homeschooling sometimes can put harmful impact because it is expensive .the reason that teacher go to student house and teach them and receiving fees.while many times they doing partly in students to receiving an amount of fees .they receive a different amount for different students.
look at it another way,it is no doubt that homeschooling belongs to last while it is acceptable in today's for different look in the developed societies .now homeschooling called online schooling it is more trendy .today,s world technology more advance and it is more useful in education field
More student don't goto school and they use their electronic gadgets in order.to education .they gain education online it is effective ness way to gain education .it is also one part of fatherhood schooling .due to advancement of technology to easier life of every person,s .children Or teacher use new technology and learn as well as teach new things .it's good method for gaining education.
In conclusion ,it is hard to deny that homeschooling is good way for education in the use of advancement technology .present time online education is part of schooling it is more trendy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19414893617 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15189464289 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502659574468 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 94.0 20.2975951904 463% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 289.66392164 49.4020404114 586% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 488.25 106.682146367 458% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 94.0 20.7667163134 453% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 32.5 7.06120827912 460% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 47.0 5.01903807615 936% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.085785482082 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633516984033 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359733434035 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0572074448749 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359778490377 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 50.0 13.0946893788 382% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -23.93 50.2224549098 -48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 21.2 7.44779559118 285% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 40.0 11.3001002004 354% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.01 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.11 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.5 9.78957915832 332% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 39.6 10.1190380762 391% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 40.0 10.7795591182 371% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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