In many countries, prison is the common solution to the problem of crime. However, another effective way is to provide people with better education so that they will not become criminals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, committing crimes is a serious problem in more and more countries. How to address this issue triggers hot debate. As far as I am concerned, prison is necessary but not the only solution.
On the one hand, better education is an effective solution to prevent crime. One of the leading functions of education is to teach young people moral values, such as being tolerant and sharing. If people do not know these values, it would be easy to conflict with others and hurt others/they would have conflict with others and hurt others.
As a result, education is conducive to improving juvenile delinquency. Another function of education is to impart knowledge and skills to students. It means that people who grasp working skills through better education will find a job to make a living , and this can prevent people from committing crimes because of a lack of money.
However, given some criminals posing a threat to society, the role of education is limited. Prison is better for them in case that they endanger society again. For example, people who are accused of drug trafficking, even though they could get high-paying jobs, they could still conduct wrong doings due to the lure of money. Undoubtedly, these people exert negative influence on society and they cannot be changed just by better education. In addition, prison, in particular life imprisonment in particular , has a more deterrent effect on criminals. Prison means losing freedom, discouraging potential criminals who are afraid of from being restricting freedom.
In conclusion, better education can reduce the possibility of committing crimes, whereas prison is the common solution to deter potential criminals and punish criminals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, whereas, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78101149673 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589090909091 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1823480368 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.75 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302406847727 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854430636354 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491659776909 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148034074688 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031769419261 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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