Every day traffic seems to get worse on our roads. How can we reduce the number of cars on our roads today? What alternatives can we offer car drivers?
It is common knowledge that roads getting busier every year. This problem is touching every big city around the world. The numbers of cars reduce the quality of air in major cities. In this essay I will suggest some solution which may reduce the problem of increasing number of the cars on the road.
Firstly, the problem of crowded roads is the problem of modern world. These days every nuclear family has at least one car. In this case I believe that government should create a law that force people to have no more than one car per family. This would have positive impact on the increasing traffic on the roads and decreasing quality of air.
Secondly, to reduce number of cars on the road people should be aware of the bad impact of the cars on the environment. The pollution created by the cars is even worst than created by the factory industry. People should be encouraging by government to use public transport. For instance, the government should invest more money in public transport system. If the buses and trains arrive on time, a few people will want to drive to work. Moreover, carpooling and cycling are also good solutions but only very few people are using these types of transport.
In conclusion, we must control the number of vehicles on the roads before the situation goes out of control. This problem has been neglected for many years, and now we have to take serious action to reduce problem of pollution and increasing traffic on the road.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: IS_EVEN_WORST[1]
Message: Probably incorrect use of superlative 'worst'. Consider using the comparative form instead: 'iller', 'worse'.
Suggestion: iller; worse
...e pollution created by the cars is even worst than created by the factory industry. P...
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Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: WORST_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worse'?
Suggestion: worse
...e pollution created by the cars is even worst than created by the factory industry. P...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, at least, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71317829457 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36850567267 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531007751938 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2375525675 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.0 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213602321476 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740312989782 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061690549688 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138462795499 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415952145511 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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