Computers have become an integral part of our lives and our homes. This has given children an easy access to video games and a lot of them play them all the time. Discuss Advantages & disadvantages of playing video games and minimizing the bad effects?
There is no rose without a thorn. Nowadays, computers perform a prominent role through individual lives. Although computer utilization and its benefits have been proved by scholars, disadvantages of computers usage as a game device for long hours per day are deniable. Computers pros and cons have been entirely argued amid parents and school administrators. I will consider two divers perspectives regarding its benefits and disadvantages through this essay. In one hand, computer as one of the most considerable invention in contemporary era have constantly admired by scientists, inventors and scholars; furthermore, its effects on modern society have been consistently convinced. Video games not only have been concealing youngsters leisure time positively, but have profoundly impressed their creativity, comprehension and learning velocity. For instance, PES Konami game as the most popular soccer game amongst youths in order to use multiple bottom have prompted their reaction speed on divers circumstances. Although teenagers’ creativity and activity through their free time have been deeply influencing by computer and video game positively, teenagers would rather to expend lots of time to play game, rather than focusing on their homework and learning procedure. Thus, uncontrolled youngsters prefer to insist on playing video games instead of continue their education process at home. Recent researches by University of Pennsylvania scholars have represented that remarkable amount of youth have been spending 7 hours a day to play video games which have seriously concerned parents and school teachers. In conclusion, computer and video games and its advantages such as increasing pupils’ creativity, imaginary power and their talents have been always considered; however, spending lots of time by uncontrolled youngsters would blemished their education process consequently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1760, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'have' and 'been'.
Suggestion: have always been
...vity, imaginary power and their talents have been always considered; however, spending lots of t...
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Line 1, column 1853, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'blemish'
Suggestion: blemish
...f time by uncontrolled youngsters would blemished their education process consequently. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, however, regarding, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 276.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90579710145 5.00649968141 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13598206833 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605072463768 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 379.143842365 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.1263935601 50.4703680194 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.833333333 104.977214359 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241414915556 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912583285584 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528350170966 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241414915556 0.151781067708 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 12.6369458128 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 53.1260098522 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.29 11.5310837438 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.61 8.32886699507 127% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 55.0591133005 185% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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