Computers have become an integral part of our lives and our homes.This has given children an easy access to video games and a lot of them play them all the time. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of playing video games and minimizing the bad effects?
The effect of computers has become an integral part of our lives and our homes. This is given to children easy access to video games and a lot of them play them all the time. It can be agreed that It has some great impact but It has some drawbacks and people tend to believe that in today's area people think that If children play video games than It is helping to improve enhance, Intelligence and increase brain power. This essay will elaborate on how computers have become an important part of children and our lives.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why electronic device computers have a most important part of our lives and also our homes because this has given children easy access to video games and a lot of them play them all the time. Some people think that playing video games is to improve brain knowledge and from that people get some good experts power. As an example, flying a plane in a game is improve in real life for that. Thus, play a vital role in this zone.
However, It can be agreed that It has some disadvantages and some people steam to be believe that If children spend whole time for playing game in computers than it is very dangerous for them because working on computer full time is effect to them eyes and brain. As a result people are spending more time in playing game so it is good that children has improve that habit to reading books. Hence is not always worth.
It can be concluded that one would better strike a balance between what is beneficial and what can be harmful. Hence, it is always advisable to direct one's effort in this right direction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...an example, flying a plane in a game is improve in real life for that. Thus, play a vit...
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Line 9, column 221, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...us for them because working on computer full time is effect to them eyes and brain. As a ...
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Line 9, column 355, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...ng game so it is good that children has improve that habit to reading books. Hence is n...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...as improve that habit to reading books. Hence is not always worth. It can be con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, thus, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 20.9802955665 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 294.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 5.00649968141 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20532267488 2.71678728327 81% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459183673469 0.580463131201 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 417.6 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.0918189353 50.4703680194 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.769230769 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.493929864889 0.242375264174 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183967078367 0.0925447433944 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.174964568091 0.071462118173 245% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.303306526943 0.151781067708 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.211331879143 0.0609392437508 347% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 53.1260098522 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 11.5310837438 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.32886699507 86% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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