Nowadays, people spend to much time at work to the extent that they hardly have time for their personal life?
In this days and age, due to spending to much time at work, many people do not enough time for their personal life. But workaholic people make better and safe future for their and other family member life. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss why I agree with this statement.
Firstly, there are various reasons why work is most important for people life. If people do work for to much time so their life in future will be totally secured but money is not everything. Being time together and with family is more useful. That people who are only in there work area so they also bring a time for other works.
Secondly, working hard is for high income and luxurious life. Only income is not everything about life but it also makes people great time for family members so people have to think about that. A family is also important for our life so do not miss them in our regular life cycle.
In conclusion, there is a strong debate between both sides but in my point of view, people have to bring a time for both work and for family also. I think also that people have to spend some important time for there family for motivation and happiness.
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Suggestion: too
In this days and age, due to spending to much time at work, many people do not e...
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
... for people life. If people do work for to much time so their life in future will ...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ing a time for both work and for family also. I think also that people have to spend...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 1207.87684729 78% => OK
No of words: 214.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42990654206 5.00649968141 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05995809995 2.71678728327 76% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 139.433497537 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495327102804 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 312.3 379.143842365 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5952167796 50.4703680194 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.0 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.504213235388 0.242375264174 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.214974735195 0.0925447433944 232% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121654164851 0.071462118173 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.335064227396 0.151781067708 221% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567108900242 0.0609392437508 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 12.6369458128 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 11.5310837438 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.32886699507 80% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 55.0591133005 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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