The claim that animals have "rights" has been subject of much debate since 1970s. Are zoos helping our anumals? Should zoos be banned? do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, it has become a colossal trend to see that since 1970s; are zoos helping our animals or not? There are myriads of reasons to explain above topic and there pros and cons. Furthermore, I will explain both the sides in this essay how zoos are help for animals. In this essay, i shall further elaborate both the sides which would plausible conclusions.
At the outset, there are deluge of arguments which favoures how zoos are helping animals for live safely. In today's era, there are lots of things, activity and other in zoos they help animals to live long. Let's take one example, In Ahmedabad Kankaria zoo located in middle of city so in this zoo animals can live and enjoy their life. Kankaria zoo is one of the place where all peoples are come for fun. So in this zoo all staff are helping animals and peoples also. Furthermore, I am totaly agree that zoos are helping animal so zoos be not banned by government and for that we take stemps.
On the dlip side, critics argue that by not following that zoos are not helping animals we can trust on zoos member and support them because if zoos are banned then where all animals live? So in my point of view zoos are helping our animals so we support them and stop banned zoos by government.
To recapitulate, above mentioned arguments one can conclude that Zoos are helping our animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57201646091 5.00649968141 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26316497347 2.71678728327 83% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502057613169 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.0 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9519574282 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4615384615 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6923076923 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 7.25397266985 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299883803034 0.242375264174 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132546930656 0.0925447433944 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805541023919 0.071462118173 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193134230869 0.151781067708 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535016866932 0.0609392437508 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 12.6369458128 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 11.5310837438 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.32886699507 83% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 55.0591133005 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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