Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain 1. Why you are selling television 2. Describe the television 3. Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it
Dear Matt,
I hope you are doing fine today.
I am writing a letter to let you know about my garage sale which is due on the coming Sunday.
Let me explain to you in more detail that we have recently been granted a permanent residency for Canada, and we have decided to move there by the end of next month. Due to this, we are selling all the household items quickly including the television to wrap up. Although, we have sold most of the items and left few kinds of stuff including an LED, so I thought to write a letter as you told me over the phone last week that you are looking to buy a used television for your kids.
I bought the LED from a well-known brand called Sony; it has a jet-black color that would be suitable for your TV launch due to color combinations. Besides, it’s a 42 inches screen, very fine pixel quality from a distance and has an inbuilt WIFI feature that would enable your kids to watch cartoons via YouTube.
Please let me know if you have any interest to buy it. If so, I think next Sunday, 18 November might be a good time to visit as I would be available at home the whole day.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon to catch up.
Your friend,
XXX
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...le which is due on the coming Sunday. Let me explain to you in more detail tha...
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...buy a used television for your kids. I bought the LED from a well-known brand...
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... kids to watch cartoons via YouTube. Please let me know if you have any inter...
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... be available at home the whole day. I am looking forward to hearing from you...
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...to hearing from you soon to catch up. Your friend, XXX
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, so, well, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31601731602 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23784821164 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623376623377 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.7898625095 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6363636364 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227060431494 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911702956117 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957123235481 0.0603063233224 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078417620476 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555372050994 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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