TPO13: The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.

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TPO13: The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.

family is one of the major bases in any individual life, it is the core of society and has an important rule in happiness. there are two types of family; extended and simple, each has a conflict in individual and society. personally, I believe an extended family is more important and essential nowadays, i feel this way for two reasons, this is because it provides more support for members financialy and emotionaly , and because it strengthens the integrity of society.

First of all, when you have a great family and connects to them perfectly they will care for you a give all support you need. so when you have a bad day or you suffer from stress you can release all these feeling by going to any member and talk to him, they will be available every time and at every situation, if you can not find one they others are in standby for you. this is emotionaly. However, financially if you get stuck in condition requires a lot of money and you can not afford it, you can ask for help and they will collect enough money to support you. my personal expirience is a compelling example for this, when I finished high school i need money to complete my journey and attend to university to study medicine, i asked my grandparent and he talked to my big family to collect enough money for that, so i easily pass this without big effort and i achieved my dream.

Secondly, to gain a strong society big families with there strong relationships are the key, furthermore, increasing number of members in society increase the variability of the culture that makes living in this community like a heaven, in addition, the country will gain benefits economicaly by using them in many occupations they nedd to achieve the development every government need. For instant, in jordan which is my country, it is composed of many extended family and this help in build a strong relationships and exchanging of thoughts,ideas,art,food that eventualy lead to contribute to the culture we hold and enjoy.

In conclusion, I am with the opinion that the extended family is needed nowadays, this is because its individually and socially advantageous.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81081081081 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89806928634 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.315071937 48.9658058833 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.818181818 100.406767564 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.6363636364 20.6045352989 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3636363636 5.45110844103 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0716257832398 0.236089414692 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375173268876 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318066136501 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0631468278431 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358437465651 0.0645574589148 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 11.7677419355 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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