Some people think that we should keep away from others to improve our relationship,
because being away from people reminds us of how important they are. Others think
we should always stay with others to have good relationship because we can
communicate with them more often. What do you think?
Currently with the development of our society and the transition in people's thinking, the importance of well relationship with others has been widely accepted which is stimulated by the trend of international communication. In the condition that the best way to get success is to get alone well with others. A issue about how to get improved in relationship between people and others was considered a lot, some people think it would be much better to keep distance with their friends while others hold a completely opposite viewpoint. From my persepective of view, the way that keeping distance with friends should be a the chosen one.
Firstly, being away from friends can help to keep friendship as long as possible. Because people can be tired of something very quickly if they make it often, and of course it do not only take effect on stuff but also people. For example, I used to have a close friend, our relationship that time were so great that anybody believe that we will be a lifelong friend. but what is out of anticipation is only one semester passed, we were tired of each other and reduced contact gradually until we were not friends. recently I met him again accidently just on the way to shopping, and we recontact because after such a long time, we do miss each other a lot. After that I realize that relationship actually needn't too much contact, only common communication can help to make relationship always perfect.
Secondly, being away from friends is important in protecting privacy and which is a essential ingredient of great relationship. There is a common misunderstanding that relationship can be stronger while the secretes are reducing. In fact this is partially right because mating do needs less privacy which means they trust and loyal to each other. But making friends are different, a proper recognition is enough to build up a longlasting relationship. on the contrary, knowing too many privacy of friends can always make contact very embarrassed. Thus, the relationship without enough privacy can't last for a long time or be as good as the before.
Nevertheless, it is ture that keeping distance with friends can cause sense of strenger sometimes. And contacting to friends frequently can usually enable us to aware of friends' present situation and a timely aid can play a pivotal in building up a soild cornerstone in relationship. My best friend is the one who i contact with from childhood to becoming adult nowadays, and the essential factor that makes out relationship so long and strong is that once i realized a great misfortune happened in his family and then i comfort him in time. Since then, we are always the best friends until now.
To summrize, different way in dealing with relationship have different effects, but once people have made all their effort for a better relationship and really appreciate their friends, all the way have a similar role that is to make friends closer
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 309, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
...ccess is to get alone well with others. A issue about how to get improved in rela...
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Line 1, column 619, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: a; the
...keeping distance with friends should be a the chosen one. Firstly, being away fr...
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Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'does'?
Suggestion: does
...if they make it often, and of course it do not only take effect on stuff but also ...
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Line 5, column 368, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...ieve that we will be a lifelong friend. but what is out of anticipation is only one...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Recently
...ct gradually until we were not friends. recently I met him again accidently just on the ...
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Line 5, column 705, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: needn't
...at I realize that relationship actually neednt too much contact, only common communica...
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Line 9, column 83, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...tant in protecting privacy and which is a essential ingredient of great relations...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...to build up a longlasting relationship. on the contrary, knowing too many privacy ...
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Line 9, column 482, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun privacy seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much privacy', 'a good deal of privacy'.
Suggestion: much privacy; a good deal of privacy
...ationship. on the contrary, knowing too many privacy of friends can always make contact very...
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Line 9, column 594, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...the relationship without enough privacy cant last for a long time or be as good as t...
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Line 13, column 458, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ionship so long and strong is that once i realized a great misfortune happened in...
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Line 13, column 520, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...fortune happened in his family and then i comfort him in time. Since then, we are...
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Line 17, column 127, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce people have made all their effort for a better relationship and really appreci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, in fact, of course, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2456.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 498.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93172690763 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72397222731 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87184259307 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 756.9 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.375924808 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.952380952 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52380952381 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322159727682 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094298773949 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066600125108 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176581673242 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918006730375 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.