the pie chart below shows where energy is used in typed Australian household and the table shows the amount of electricity used according to the number of occupants summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
the pie chart illustrates the energy consumption in household purpose in Australia, and table displays the electricity used by based on number of individuals.
overall, it is clear that majority of people are using the electricity for heating and cooling. As well, released on standby. however, according to the table data, the more than nor 6 people in house have exerted more power.
the domestic purpose of energy consumption by Australia people. the heating and cooling have more often usage with 38% is compared to others consumption. Also, followed by water heating with 25 percentage as the second position. moreover, utilising the power in other appliances have stands on 16 percentage and remaining of lighting and fridges and freezer's constant 7 percentage. the least household gets on constant run out without any usage by any electrical device with 3 percentage.
on the other hand, the table shows the electricity used per kilowatt hours by people in Australia home. The highest kilowatt hours per power consumption takes place when the six nor more than people staying in house get 12000 to 16000 kilowatt hour. In addition at least one person in home used 5000 to 6500 kilo watt energy exerted.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, second, so, well, at least, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15577889447 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69761736838 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582914572864 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3795577519 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5833333333 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 5.23603664747 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175725061672 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660304271818 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840381791203 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130112023435 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899556134606 0.0819641961636 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.