Some people say the government should give the health care the first priorities, some others believe there are more important priorities to spend the taxpayers' money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
How governments should use the tax revenue appropriately is always a heated topic among the public. Some people state that the healthcare services should be the primary priority on using this money while others are holding opposite opinions. This essay will argue the possible effects on both sides and give my personal idea in the end.
On the one hand, healthcare services are playing an important role in current society. To begin with, the most important matter that people care about is their health. For instance, a healthy and balanced diet lifestyle such as less meat and more vegetable intake is adopted by more and more people. Additionally, regular checkup and physical activities are taken as a part of people’s daily life that is a widespread common phenomenon around the world. Finally, folks will benefit from this state pension which if more money is spent on the healthcare services. Governments could use this capital to invest in medicine researches in some particular diseases such as cancer and give these medicines to citizens for free after successful.
On the other hand, some people argue that the tax revenue should be used in some more significant areas. Education is frequently mentioned by many people that they believe the government should distribute the educational resources more balanced, especially in some remote areas. Furthermore, increasing traffic congestion is a salient issue that caused many problems in modern society. In other words, the government could use more public money in transport which to construct and run a more efficient transport system in order to reduce traffic.
In conclusion, this essay argued the different opinions with several factors as possible reasons. From my point of view, I believe that the most important thing is how governments to balance and operate all of these areas due to health, education or transport are necessary for our daily lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 518, Rule ID: IF_IS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, if, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26774193548 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69862569564 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574193548387 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9088970715 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.866666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303933352804 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904868279036 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624362141145 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172014368273 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455871422343 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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