some people argue that a growing number of young people spend too much time in watching T.V. Why does this phenomenon happen? And what kinds of activities should they be encouraged to do?
Spending massive time in watching television is increasing among the youth. Quite a few people have argument in this issue. There are numerous reasons for this occurrence. In this essay i shall discuss causes and types of activities can be motivated them to drift away from the screen.
To being with, there are several reasons behind addiction of television among the youngsters. Firstly, in this contemporary era, mostly both parents are working and they do not have enough time to spend with children due to this, habit of isolation evolve from childhood and they get addicted to the television. To illustrate, time news reported that 80% of juveniles get addicted to the screen at the age of 5 onward.
Secondly, enormous channel has been telecasted across the world. Young people enjoy varieties of channels. Because of the globalisation it is possible to watch programs which are telecasted in another countries. Some T.V. channels render 24/7 hours service. So it became very difficult to deter youngsters form screen. To elaborate, there are number of international sports activities available at day and night.Youth are fond of sports so they get engaged with that.
However,they can be stimulated in many activities which can stay away them from television. In this case parents should take initiative to motivate them to play outdoor games which can help them to build confidence and make them active.For example, sport club involved different outdoor and indoor activities or gym can be joined to maintain fitness and drift way from television. In addition,they can enrol in the library so assists in developing their reading habit and enhance knowledge. Furthermore, parents should have more discussion with them which can develop better bonding between them.
To conclude, it is true that television is attracting plethora of youngsters and wasting their valuable time. Numerous reasons supporting this phenomenon but some activities can be helped to avoid consequences of television on young generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.371875 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85197128919 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590625 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.9082400836 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4736842105 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8421052632 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52631578947 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221406031555 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670552871193 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513400519906 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129434623309 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375502167832 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.