Some people believe that modern high technology is transforming the way we work and is benefit to all of society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Few masses opine that adopting present day super technology in day to day life is changing style of work of the people and it is proven that this brings welfare in the society. I agree to a large extent because there are many advantages of this phenomena. In following essay i support my argument.
To begin with, latest technology has completely changed the way of working of the people. Nowadays, machinery plays an important role in many fields. Earlier people used to make many things in their hands,now it is replaced by machinery which enables to create good quality with huge quantities at minimum time. Manufacturers and customers both get benefit because of low cost of production. To illustrate, cost of machine clothes are very cheaper than handmade clothes. Secondly, development in the IT field assists people to exchange their ideas and views between countries within a second. Instead of using past services, many are using electronic mails to get instant reply which enables to develop business transactions rapidly. For example, windows outlook is an example of online business transactions application that helps to save time and money both.
Furthermore, it also aids to enhance economy of the nation. Technology is very useful in different sectors. Nowadays way of working of the people has been changed which resulted into better efficiency, production, good amount of result, time saving and many more. Modern technique helps to reduce cost of the product that attract number of customers through which the authority collect revenue. This money can be utilised for further development of the country.
To conclude, technology has brought drastic change in people's working style due to which they save their time and money. Masses are able to work more effectively and efficiently. It also helps in economic development of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70695400774 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586666666667 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4935832572 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7368421053 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7894736842 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05263157895 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139155442377 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389457684998 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04187130173 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918893099892 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214969856814 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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