Nowadays, people are spending increasingly large amounts ofmoney on their marriage parties. Many people feel large andexpensive weddings cause problems for the bride and groom.Do you agree? Use personal examples in your response.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...me important in the process of marriage.Therefore, individuals tend to spend important su...
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...pend important sums on these ceremonies.This may have many drawbacks on both sides o...
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...on both sides of this matrimonial event.This essay supported with accurate examples ...
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... before committing to matrimony so they dont have enough savings to pay for all the ...
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...the expenditures of a big wedding party.Therefore,most of them end up contracting loans e...
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...ditures of a big wedding party.Therefore,most of them end up contracting loans either...
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... up contracting loans either from family,friends or Banks. This situation can lead to a ...
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... situation can lead to a stressful life.This newly married couple instead of enjoyin...
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...ut the way they Will pay back the loan. This can create tensions between them and ca...
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...hem to divorce. It happened in my family,a cousin of mine contracted a loan to pay...
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...ontracted a loan to pay for his wedding.Unfortunately he couldnt pay it back. He became very ...
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...to pay for his wedding.Unfortunately he couldnt pay it back. He became very nervous and...
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...d started to blame his wife for it, she couldnt stand the situation thus they got divor...
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...nly two years old. In addition to this,most of the time due to some cultural pressu...
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... rent or buy a house where they can live .In Algeria,for instance,parents pay impo...
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...ent or buy a house where they can live .In Algeria,for instance,parents pay import...
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... a house where they can live .In Algeria,for instance,parents pay important sums for...
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...e they can live .In Algeria,for instance,parents pay important sums for the pastries,mus...
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...ents pay important sums for the pastries,music,garments,jewelry...on their childrens w...
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...ant sums for the pastries,music,garments,jewelry...on their childrens wedding.Ironically...
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...ts,jewelry...on their childrens wedding.Ironically this newly wed couple doesnt even have ...
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...childrens wedding.Ironically this newly wed couple doesnt even have the budget to r...
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...edding.Ironically this newly wed couple doesnt even have the budget to rent a small ho...
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...n have the budget to rent a small house.Consequently, after the honeymoon the couple moves t...
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...conflicts within the family. To sum up,it is advisable to celebrate a wedding but...
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...advisable to celebrate a wedding but it shouldnt be at the expenses of the newly wed cou...
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...houldnt be at the expenses of the newly wed couple since this can lead to divorce o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31818181818 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.72976493675 2.80592935109 133% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587662337662 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 146.91502541 49.4020404114 297% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 182.0 106.682146367 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.2222222222 20.7667163134 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.44444444444 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0850295174422 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367123820528 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0202184840301 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0527760913726 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0131782326595 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.0946893788 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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