Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet.
What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved?
Nowadays people are facing serious physical and mental health issues because of including an unhealthy diet knowingly or unknowingly. One possible reason for this is due to the availability of a wide variety of dining options and one possible solution for this by spending quality time to consume healthy food.
People tend to adapt to the changing lifestyles regularly. Due to which sometimes they failed to notice the irregularities in their diet. This unorganized diet affects them severely and leads to illness. With the increasing popularity of the online dining options with various fancy options on the payment. People tend to fall for this trap often, without considering the nutritious value of the food. These kinds of foods are mostly tasty than healthy. While ordering online, people's concentration should not just limit to the money. But it should also include the quality of food they order.
One more reason to add is, that people feel, they can't allocate some time either to for grocery shopping or cook or even both in their busy life schedule. Overall this is considered to be an incompetent decision by skipping a healthy diet which is essential for their body. Sometimes people prepare instant food and consume them. In the majority of cases, instant food seems unhealthy. But they still chose them since it saves their time.
To conclude, people should put to an end to thier unstructured lifestyle and consider eating healthy food. Just for the sake of saving some time people should not go for unhealthy food and they should be aware of the side-effects of following an unhealthy diet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 51, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...eason to add is, that people feel, they cant allocate some time either to for grocer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07116104869 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57322723596 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565543071161 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6782910671 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6470588235 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7058823529 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.82352941176 7.06120827912 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150241699876 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514625843936 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425719890614 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102992236267 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00358682503294 0.056905535591 6% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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