Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Business of health service, backed by modern technology, has been emerging all over the world. Though availing modern medical facilities require very expensive equipments, I strongly agree that all the nations shall ensure basic medical services at no cost with the view that nobody shall die without treatment.
In this era of technological innovation and medical advancements, it is very unexpected that a person has to die without medical care. governments shall introduce health-care schemes to treat the sick citizens which will not only reduce the early-mortality rate, but also increase the life expectancy of the people. In Bangladesh, for example, the government focused on decreasing the number of children died each year and allocated budget on the action-plan as well. Surprisingly the child-mortality rate has decreased from 18% to 3% within five years. Everyone deserves to live a healthy life, so the public authorities shall make medical facilities available general people.
On the other hand, access to advanced medical treatments is extremely expensive because of the sophisticated devices used in the process that such facilities, if offered for free, will require the government agencies to allocate an extensive fund which most of the countries can barely afford. In case of operating advanced medical facilities, policy-makers shall offer subsidy to the public so that neither the institution face obstacles in running the organizations nor the patients suffer financially. charging for modern medical treatments is acceptable to enable the service providers improve the services continuously.
To conclude, medical treatments have become so expensive that patients’ families get badly affected in terms of cost. In this regard, countries shall offer basic medical facilities without charging money and subsidize the advanced medical facilities to reduce the burden of patients and empower the medical service providers for further improvements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Governments
...person has to die without medical care. governments shall introduce health-care schemes to ...
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Line 9, column 507, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Charging
...ns nor the patients suffer financially. charging for modern medical treatments is accept...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, as to, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75254237288 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05433698741 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603389830508 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5628117467 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.416666667 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167184147799 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619167726642 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414067321102 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107883557895 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279696572626 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.37 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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