Demand for food is increasing worldwide. what is the causes of this, what measures can the international community take into this demand.
In world, people are raised the need for food. this can be caused by overpopulation and corruption, and tackling of this food problem by international communities have the influence to solve.
The Origins of meal issues for people in the world. first, the growing of population in every Nation can shortage the food to share to the everyone. this growth can also from agricultural land where converted into the houses which leads to less food production. another issue from the corruption which is done by the many politicians in all our places. in other words, the parties of certain governments were biasing the profits to certainly corporate people which would be lessen the benefits to the poor people to eat food. furthermore, demanding rise in all over world for meals which can be form population increased and corrupted governments.
Turning to possible solutions for food demand from communities of international. one remedy is that the people who has better food and limited population could be support the another Nation peoples. this can be balance the food in certain areas. another remedy is that the power influence by world Unions such as a United Nations Organisation(UNO) can be built service camps and strict rules for food services which areas are affected by unfair governments. this would change the local authority schemes because of the pressure from the international persons. therefore, supporting and caring the effected nations in food by foreign Nations could met the demanding.
In conclusion increasing of meals demand in some nations of the world.these could have uncontrolled population and corrupted authorities which can solve only by influence of foreign communities and exchanging needs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89838940742 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527272727273 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1662214964 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277772609038 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10689559196 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808173539218 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197232585165 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669106011082 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.